Last one

Here's the final copy of the story.  It's a little tighter.  Thanks for all of your help, I hope you enjoy it.

New edited version

Here's the newest edited version.  Thanks for all the feedback, I think this one is a little better.  Let me know what you think.

Dance Story

Well this has been a wonderful project to work on, I have really loved it.  I find in amazing that even after the fact, after a performance that took place months ago you can still feel the Spirit.  Please let me know if there is anything that I can do to make it better.  Thanks.