Tuesday, July 21, 2009

New edited version

Here's the newest edited version.  Thanks for all the feedback, I think this one is a little better.  Let me know what you think.

2 comments:

DAVID BOREN said...

Thang:

Not do put down your writing, but when Sherrie saw this she said, "I have nothing to say! He's much better at this than writing!" I thought your selections of dance clips and talking was well-balanced. I would have liked to hear a little more about what the dancers said, or at least heard a little from them towards the end. I don't know if you tried putting some more background music or something in there. I'm sure you've already tried that. It made sense, though if I hadn't know beforehand what it was about, I wouldn't have know who was talking at the beginning and what they were referring to when they said they were sharing the plan of salvation. I enjoyed it. Overall I thought it was very good.

Jean said...

That was fun to watch, thank you!I think you did a great job. The editing of Mandy, Brittany, and Kenzie was really well done. Being able to perform that show in Russia was one of the most amazing experiences I know that I will ever have! We were able to share our testimonies and the spirit to a nation who's religiosity overall is dwindling. But seeing their reaction to us testified to me that the truth of our message can be felt by anyone in the world, despite the language barrier.